APL: konce = telfykonce : B is a telephone hand-set/receiver (so called because using one is like listening to a sea-shell).

No. hue Sai, I mi papa dirgoi pa ta

It seems to me that dirgoi = go toward D from S is not the right word. LOD gives darkaa and dirkaa for go away, and go away from respectively. Either is suitable here. Actually dirgoi is also possible since no destination is given but since a source is implied, the kamla form is preferable.

I mi djadou Sai, roba ji perti Fai {/gui}, e comtoabeo lepo na no blicu ga lepo sai takna Fai{,/guo}kou lepo mi stuli le taksoa katmei patce.
The original comma before kou closed everything back to djadou, and the comtoabeo was part of the ji, hence the ji clause must be closed with gui. With no comma, the kou modifies takna, whereas I think no blicu is what should be modified, hence the lepo must be closed with guo.

Kie, ne tokvempae ga no sitfa le krokru, e snire le lufta, kiu.
This is another instance of a lexer problem, where the wrong version of e is chosen, when inside a free modifier. It will be corrected after these analyses are finished. The sentence is correct as written, but does not parse with the current LIP.

I, na le nerfucdei lemi fremi ga dapli li, No, la Pal Smiq papa stude lo bivsensi la SantaKruz Rorpebkea, nia le melio voni dekninkeo, lu
I am not sure if le melio voni dekninkeo means what he wishes. I would be inclined to say nia le dekninkeo lio nevevoni. The definition of dekninkeo is a decade of epoch F, where I understand epoch to mean the beginning of a defined period, in this case a 10-year interval.