I le kortcela pe la BeibiDjein ga redro, ice lemi kortcela ga blanu
Lemi kei is not possible as kei replaces the argument le cortcela. mi kei are two different arguments, so to say mi kei would say that I was bluer than kei (le kortcela).

Nao, na le nazdei miu pa pasnoa sacduo lepo fleti {/guo}, e rande fleti gangoi vi le gangoi kerkro, pia lepo limiu pu ganta ga tsufi lepo miu fleti ne notbi lufta jo.

I mi sira hirti lepo sisle je le kerti ji djupo lemi tcela
APL: sira
experimental 'only'
RAM: This seems reasonable to me (at most a one-some)

ikou la Sol pania damni
APL: pania
was still?
Also reasonable - a continuous action between the past and the present.
rorkoo = ro kolro multicoloured

I fei caslo supo caslo ji clika lepo caslo je le falko {gue/}jio mi papa hirti cei na lepo mi duvrai lemi fagtroku
The jio clause should apply to the falcon of the flint, so the je phrase should not be closed.

APL: (in connection with a parenthetical remark spanning three sentences) Parser won't take multiple sentences within kie//kiu.
These three sentences will parse within kie/kiu if the periods at the end of the sentence are omitted.

Fa lepo banci {/guo,}miu skitu vi le gardi je le geshaa, e bleka le ra pernu ji papa grujmi va, moi lepo pei trokybamduo

In this instance, a comma suffices, but guo is recommended anyway.

Ba ji kinsea leu gliso balma, hue mei, klimao {/gu}, duvrai leu balma jio lebei kolro ga samto, ibuo leu forma ji nenri bei gui, ga dilri ne spebi hamseije leu forma ji notbi ce kunci.
Ibuo lemi matma balma, hue mei, pracue, no ga purfe.
A gu is necessary to signal that duvrai is not part of the free modifier.
In the second instance, the sequel is not another predicate which could be part of a compound predicate, so the gu is not needed.

APL: Perhaps 'gudcanspe' is how to wish someone luck, and 'lo gudcae' for What a piece of luck

I la Stiv {/ga}slafo, ice hue Sai, kafdurcue {/gu}, Hoi Tun, pazda lefa po trokybamduo, soi kurni.
The parser bunches the two freemods together. This doesn't really matter to either the parser or the speaker, but to avoid it, one must move the Hoi Tun either after pazda, or betwen the trokybamduo and the soi kurni. I am leaving it as written

I ri{/,}tei nu madzo ba lo vegrfi troku, ja nu marka lo aurmoykoo ge venha netre, ice ri{/,}tei nu madzo lo krisitali je lo kuarzi, e purfe kliri. I ri{/,}tei ji gliso ga nu nenri ne cmacma po larklu.
These commas are needed with the current LIP because of the older system of dimensioned numbers e.g. lio netokeimei. As lio neto kilmei is now permitted, this combining of numbers and letterals is no longer needed, and will be corrected. I have endevoured to make all sentences parse correctly with the current LIP for the benefit of anyone studying the grammar.

I uu, na lepo miu siasti ne geshaa moi lepo titci le midmia {/guo guo}, mi norbilbiu flesti, ice lemi fitydji ga valna torni inukou le muskoe ga nartycpu.